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Every time I log in you've uploaded a new drawing. Makes me happy to see because it reminds me of when I used to do the same thing. XD But unfortunately I don't have time to comment on them all.

It's amazing how much better you've gotten since I started watching you. You improve so fast!

The picture now - I really like fantasy themed characters in general so a plus from me. Although the pose feels a bit unbalanced, even if she's hovering. Her left foot should be smaller than the other since it's behind the other (perspective-wise). The hand in the front should also be a bit bigger to add to the perspective. The other hand is about the right size but I don't think the "pose" feels very natural, she gives a very calm feeling but her hand looks a bit strain. Don't be afraid to play around with poses more and make them extreme, you can always fix it easily in photoshop.
The overall impact is very good, she could be from a jrpg definatly. And her colour scheme is amazing, the green with the pinkish hair toned with red makes a great contrast. The wings gives a very sweet touch and she's very adorable and I like her a lot!

I hope I wasn't too hard on you, keep on posting! X)
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:icondrawerelma:
DrawerElma Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You weren't too hard on me at all, I agree with everything you said XD The whole pose was kinda difficult to work with, i tried to make up with the dress's colors scheme.
I already know anatomy isn't my strong point, but it is yours and all these tips really helped :3 Thank you so much :heart: I think I should study anatomy more, then I would probably draw better, also play with perspectives as you suggested.
I'm also glad my art makes you happy ;A; haha *is embarrassed* :blush:
But I must ask; What did you do to understand anatomy? Drawing lots of humans or draw every day to improve? Even if you say I improved lots, i feel as if it's still too slow x''''D

Tack för kritiken ^-^)/
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